Mr. Smith has made some amazing additions and changes to the script. Lookin’ like it may be as good as I’d hoped it would be. He’s added an unusual little twist to the narrative. Unusual to say the least. The idea is good, but it will be quite the test to see if I, as a director, can hit the proper balance of tone. Either it will will rock or fall painfully dead. All on my shoulders. Someone page Mr. Spielberg.